I love it, great work... 5/5 ^_^

Hat Damn Luke, you've done it...... very well done sweetie. You are quick to learn, I am proud of you. Wonderful write, very well expressed, the flow and rhyme are perfect.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Yes ! Luke
I can definatly see how much your poetry has grown in the last few days . Becoming stronger and more powerful . I know your style at the beginning was a trade mark with the caps but it looks so wonderful now . I might just capitalize the I's in this one...but that is just my opnion ...*S*
And maybe a space between anotherday ...

I find poems with loads of caps really take away from the poem leaving it hard to read and losing alot of meaning .

You are improving greatly day by day Luke ! Keep up the great work and always keep a pen close by ....you never know when a great idea for a poem will come along ...

Your last stanza is my absolute favorite .

I wish i could write like you man you are soo good....!!!!