Existing

by ShadowDancer   Feb 28, 2006


To exist in a world of non-permanent beauty
To try to make sense of it all
To move through life in ignorance
Not taking risks, too scared of a fall

For we all strive for knowledge and power
We all want to be someone great
To make the most of all we want to do
To make our own choices, or following our fate.

To take in every last moment
To savor each and every breath
For every moment experienced
Will vanish into nothing with your death

It makes you wonder the meaning
Of the work you do, fun or mundane
For no matter how much or little you do
When we die, we all are the same

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    A very nice inspirationsal poem that shows human nature in its worse way.. hrm. but the only thing i dont really like is the repeated use of 'we' and 'to'

    Otherwise a good poem!

    x.x:Lauren

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Yes it is very intellectual.
    And I feel that it is true.
    I liked it, not quite as good as some of your previous work but, itwas still good all the same.
    love
    ~Em

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Wow this mirrors my thoughts. great. i love these lines:
    For every moment experienced
    Will vanish into nothing with your death
    and
    When we die, we all are the same
    they are resounding. amazing

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Every now and then it felt a bit awkward, but it still paints a vivd image. The last line was pretty true.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    So true . . . Your poetry really is lovely, the images you use are vivid and strong :) Great work!

    Peace. [Sole]

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