I like the idea that when we die we are all teh same. its' very intelligent. Nice work! ttyl, Suzie

I liked this poem alot. i thought it deserved a 4.5 tho but i voted 5 becaus eit was closer. i love the message but it reminds me a LOT of a song i've heard by GC. its called ((actually its like two of theyre songs combined...)) Movin' On and We Believe. one thing i dont like is the last line on stanza 3. i think it is a few syllables too long. other than that i really liked it!
♥Lauren

Very good. BRAVO! Loved the last line. "When we die, We are all the same" That is so true. 5/5 =]

- natz x-x-x

So true . . . Your poetry really is lovely, the images you use are vivid and strong :) Great work!

Peace. [Sole]

Every now and then it felt a bit awkward, but it still paints a vivd image. The last line was pretty true.

Wow this mirrors my thoughts. great. i love these lines:
For every moment experienced
Will vanish into nothing with your death
and
When we die, we all are the same
they are resounding. amazing

Yes it is very intellectual.
And I feel that it is true.
I liked it, not quite as good as some of your previous work but, itwas still good all the same.
love
~Em

A very nice inspirationsal poem that shows human nature in its worse way.. hrm. but the only thing i dont really like is the repeated use of 'we' and 'to'

Otherwise a good poem!

x.x:Lauren