by Jessee Feb 28, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I think that everyone in this world, |
THis poems is good i liked what its talkin about..and its really true but i do think there are some adjustments you could make..like the spacing in between it shouldnt be there..cause it messes with the flow..but besides that i really enjoyed reading it..Good Job...Joc |
Great poem! 5/5. Thanxs so much for the comment on my poem..ure writing is very good as well. |
by last_petal
I like the way you write even it does not contain deep words it can make your reader feel the emotions of the poem.... i like it.. Keep up the good work.... |