I like the way you write even it does not contain deep words it can make your reader feel the emotions of the poem.... i like it.. Keep up the good work....

Great poem! 5/5. Thanxs so much for the comment on my poem..ure writing is very good as well.
~*tess*~

THis poems is good i liked what its talkin about..and its really true but i do think there are some adjustments you could make..like the spacing in between it shouldnt be there..cause it messes with the flow..but besides that i really enjoyed reading it..Good Job...Joc