by Alexis Feb 28, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
It's all a lie. |
by UnToLd TrUtH
I really like this one. I like how you ened it. Very cool. 5/5 |
by Ike Dizzle
Hmm you know what will help? If you like try to focus on your syllables more. You have too less in one lie and too much in the other try to keep it balanced. It's hard because I can't really do it but i try. But i like the intensity in it. |