Wow I love this poem I can relate to it but I have to change him to her and it tells of my story keep writing 5/5

Thank you!

Hey Cori thanks for the comment on my "Making Love" poem sorry if you found it gross, but I promise with life experience you'll realise that making love goes beyond the physical connection . Thankyou for your compliment though, by the way noticed this poem has a similar rythm. Keep up the work!