Starlight night

by Italian Stallion   Mar 1, 2006


Starlight night
shining ever so bright
take my hand
by the calmness of the moonlight

As we walk
hand in hand
I ask you this
as you look at the stars

Will you be mine?
I know I've waited a long time
come with me
I have something to show

Sit here in the ever so soft
light of the night
look at the stars reflection on the water
as I seek you with this soft melody of mine

~working on making this longer~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Another good poem by joe. mmm...do you accept a complaint joe? can't you give your poems more details and make them longer?? it upsets me that just as I come to enjoy them, you finish them. think a little about the readers too.
    take care,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Always4You

    That was very nice:) however, it would be so much better if you made it longer!! But other than that..The words used were awesome! Keep it up!

    ~ALways4You~ (Thanks for commenting on mine)

  • 18 years ago

    by me

    Nice poem its really good keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    Well i love short poems this one will definetly be one of my favorites very well written and sweet
    take care
    HS

  • 18 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Very nice Joe. Sweet and romantic.

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