Hey Joe,
I'm glad to see you have a new poem posted. I missed reading your great work, and this is other example of what a great job you do. Its short but sweet. I could picture the whole thing while reading : )

Great work, keep writing.
Love ya,
xoxoJuliexoxo

Excellent wording and detail..Terrific Job...my only suggestion...it to make it a little longer...i know you can say more then that..but from what is up there..you did a magnificent job
amazing
5/5
~The Broken Man~

Hey joe. great work there hun. keep it up dn't like 2 c ppl this good not writing! catch ya l8er... keep writing or ELSE lol
Ruthie xoxo

Very nice Joe. Sweet and romantic.

Well i love short poems this one will definetly be one of my favorites very well written and sweet
take care
HS

Nice poem its really good keep it up

That was very nice:) however, it would be so much better if you made it longer!! But other than that..The words used were awesome! Keep it up!

~ALways4You~ (Thanks for commenting on mine)

Another good poem by joe. mmm...do you accept a complaint joe? can't you give your poems more details and make them longer?? it upsets me that just as I come to enjoy them, you finish them. think a little about the readers too.
take care,
marjan