Thanks for your comment and I'm returning the favor. This is a really good poem. I like it. Keep your head up and keep writing. Girl, you got skill. Good Job. A+

Sorry for your loss I no how it feels take care hun sarah x

First of all... I absolutely love this poem its absolutely excellent.. and the 2nd part thanks so much 4 commenting on my poem it means alot to me

~!*Meaghen~!*
~!*FallenTears~!*

Wow i love this poem.... its really deep and full of emotion... you can tell your mom was/is a very very special person, and so are you... i have to wonder if your mom passed away? Great freakin job i love this poem -Jen- 5/5

PS. check out some of my poems sometime :)

Awww!! It seriously put tears to my eyes the second time...Im sorry if you lost your mom for some reason..Just know that shes always with you. Great job hun!!

First of all I'd like to say I'm really sorry for your loss. I know how hard it is losing someone close.

As for the poem, Like everyone has stated above. It was beautiful. The flow and rhyming scheme were good. And the way you worded it was fantastic. I loved this poem, Honestly. It was great. Keep your head up and smile. =] 5/5

`taleeee xx

Wow... I love the use of imagery. The flow was great and words so powerful. Great write. 5/5

Hey, nice poem. I usually don't go for rhyming schemes. But I definitely fell for this one. Almost inspired me to start rhyming, tee hee. Good job.

-Tony

Awwww.....so sad, yet so very very good! 5/5 Keep up the good work!

-Stephanie-

Really Great Poem There My Friend...Keep It Up

You can really feel the sadnes in this poem, especially towards the end, the word choice is good, the structure suits the poem, and overall was a pleasure to read, keep on writing.

That was so beautiful I loved this poem cause it shows the relationship you have with your mother 5/5

Awwwz great poem!!
it was very well written!!
keep up the good work!!

<3 i love you silly

This is really pretty, if you don't mind me asking did something happen to your mom...pm me ok... 5/5 oh yeah I LOVE THE FLOW!!

Lovely job the third stanza that was amazing my absolute favorite part out of the whole poem this poem spoke to me in a way that i dont know it reminded me of all of my deceased relatives...nice work