Show Me...

by Void   Mar 1, 2006


Show me the world hidden in your mind,
Cry me the tear that your eyes firmly bind
Bring forth emotion, that makes the world crumble,
Pull down some bricks, and watch the walls tumble.

So in your smile, let me see eternal light,
Where the sun never falls and autumn leaves take flight
Waves of yellow, gold and green,
Don't let your smile go unseen

Show me emotion, bring about the rain,
Cry me the tear that will share all your pain.
Bring forth the thunder, release all its sound,
Pull down the lightening with its force unbound.

When I look into your eyes,
I pray to see no disguise.
The secret strands of black and white,
No longer hidden from my sight.

Show me your strength, by falling apart,
Cry me the tears of your aching heart.
Bring forth a story of your feeling's erosion,
Pull down the glory, of escaping emotion.

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  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Very powerful words, great flow and rhyme.

    enjoyed reading this very much.

    good luck and peace
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    This is a very good poem. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work!

    --*NaydeeN*

  • 18 years ago

    by Moose

    To be honest this is a really great poem and I think it deserves a 5/5 its a little short but it displays the emotions youve felt already. The rhyming scheme is on and you're doing great with it. I liked it and I hope you continue to write

    By the way, i think Show Me is better because youre asking in the poem to show you a lot more than just emotion. Great poem and keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Purple

    The title you have now is great. I like the constant connectoin between wealther/seasons and the emotoins we have and hide. It's very good and expecaully touching for some one who reconises they lock their own emotoins away.

  • 18 years ago

    by Spencer

    Show me... is a great title. Show me emotion would give it a label and take away from the poem's content. That is a bad arse poem. You rock.

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