Good poem. i enjoyed it. keep up the good work

Hey I love that poem, you are really talented...n thnx for the comment you sent me :)

Show me... is a great title. Show me emotion would give it a label and take away from the poem's content. That is a bad arse poem. You rock.

The title you have now is great. I like the constant connectoin between wealther/seasons and the emotoins we have and hide. It's very good and expecaully touching for some one who reconises they lock their own emotoins away.

To be honest this is a really great poem and I think it deserves a 5/5 its a little short but it displays the emotions youve felt already. The rhyming scheme is on and you're doing great with it. I liked it and I hope you continue to write

By the way, i think Show Me is better because youre asking in the poem to show you a lot more than just emotion. Great poem and keep it up.

This is a very good poem. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work!

--*NaydeeN*

Very powerful words, great flow and rhyme.

enjoyed reading this very much.

good luck and peace
shobhana