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HEY, YOU HAVE REAL TALENT KEEP IT UP AND THANKS FOR YOUR TIP!

Another true and well written piece, if only dreams weren't so fickle eh? Like most things in this materialistic world - however, the one lucky thing about western society, is that unlike our brothers in deprived nations, at least we have a choice to attempt to live our dreams, if we work hard enough. That choice was given to us by fate, other's will never have that luck. Perhaps in our lifetime that might change, maybe humanity might learn some important lessons. It'd be nice wouldn't it. Well done again, kudos! :) x

It's about our life all right! Never stops!
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Great poem
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~aubrey~