by Lauren G. Mar 1, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
You. |
by Ariana
Nice write. I liked how you set it out it is different and I also liked how you didn't have to fall back into a rhyming scheme, this works very well and has it's own flow without needing to rhyme. You imagery is well written and picturesque, and you idolize this person without sounding over-the-top of cliched. I can also get a real sense of desire from this. Overall nice write :) |