Darkness

by Torn   Mar 1, 2006


Puddle of red,
Blocks of gray.
Smashed white powder,
Found where I lay.

Twisted thoughts,
Nervous, strained heart.
Suddenly stopped beating,
But it had from the start.

Worthless, idealistic toys,
Laying all around.
Razors, drugs, tissues,
Were all regretfully found.

Secretive, puzzled diaries,
Dreadfully exposed to all.
Graphically recounting,
My each and every fall.

Letters of love,
Of what was left of me.
Pouring my heart out,
For everyone to see.

A dark shadow formed,
It was my time to go.
Light at the end of the tunnel,
Was fading away so slow.

Darkness has engulfed me,
Burnt my every desire.
Suffocated hate,
Into hell, I now retire.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Shae

    This is soooo deep.i love it,i love all of your poems.your a very good writer.

  • 18 years ago

    by The Black Angel Lloyd Rose

    I love how you were able to show regret within every verse leading to the finale. great ending. nice flow. 5/5 keep up the great work.

  • 18 years ago

    by CaffeineBomb

    I really love this because it's so brutal and occasionally violent, when it could so easily have turned into something completely different and not nearly so powerful. It's incredible stuff!

  • 18 years ago

    by Monique

    Hey there,
    well.. first of all AMAZING! I love it to pieces, a perfect dark poem dear. My favourite stanza..
    Twisted thoughts,
    Nervous, strained heart.
    Suddenly stopped beating,
    But it had from the start.
    It had me in awe, i love it. well great job, and well written.
    **Monique**

  • 18 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    Hey you had some really good description in this poem
    thank you so much for actually leaving a comment that had a suggestion in it, it's nice to hear others opinions on things, and i ended up changing the peom because i liked your way better
    thanks again
    ~kristin

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