Fukin hell now your thinkin like the old me anna, not so good. the poem itself was your best yet though, fukin well writen, i aspire to write like you one day! im havin a great time, i just hope you could to you know.... luv always - Anonymous

I love this poem huni, its soo good...u r so talented... i wish my poems were as good as urz....i miss u so much huni i need u m0r dan ever...i wish u were here with me......luv y0o s0 much

Great.... awesome....
ur every word expresses the pain.
i loved it....its too dark. a perfect dark poem dear.5/5

Bharti

Wow. Amazing poem. Nice written. I really love it. I should read it over again! "into hell, I now retire" So powerful. Love every part of it. Well done once again sweety, keep it up, Love you =) -xxx-

I want y0o 2 c0me over s0on babe i miss y0o like crazy!! :D:D:D we will meet s0on...just tell me a day...i really need u s0 bad ur such a great friend...ill always b here 4 y0o...

Wow hun. 1. thats an amazing poem!!
2. that scares the sh** out of me. i love u hun... i wish you weren't so down like this all the time. but i know it's hard, and just know that im always here, no matter what.
love u!!
xoxoxo

As always your writing is perfect (I did miss you while you were away, I've got some new poems up now)

~*You are such a great writer... like seriously im jealous lol... but no i really liked it 5/5 keep it up*~ XoXo
-Crazy

Ah,
First off..I would like to thank you for all of the comments on my poems.
now, to your poem..
I like the imagery. It's very visible and realistic.
And the word choice fits it all together.
It was an honor to have a poet such as yourself read my work. I mean that truly. Good day.

[&& As for the typo's in my poem..I get carried away with typing and don't fix my mistakes. :] ]

You'll be back!

This poem was great.

Uh, the flow seemed to be cut off a little at this stanza:
Letters of love,
Of what was left of me.
Pouring my heart out,
For everyone to see.

I don't know why, maybe because the rhyming scheme changed a little.

Hmm, I don't know.

Anyways, great poem, keep up the good work.

Hey you had some really good description in this poem
thank you so much for actually leaving a comment that had a suggestion in it, it's nice to hear others opinions on things, and i ended up changing the peom because i liked your way better
thanks again
~kristin

Hey there,
well.. first of all AMAZING! I love it to pieces, a perfect dark poem dear. My favourite stanza..
Twisted thoughts,
Nervous, strained heart.
Suddenly stopped beating,
But it had from the start.
It had me in awe, i love it. well great job, and well written.
**Monique**

I really love this because it's so brutal and occasionally violent, when it could so easily have turned into something completely different and not nearly so powerful. It's incredible stuff!

I love how you were able to show regret within every verse leading to the finale. great ending. nice flow. 5/5 keep up the great work.

This is soooo deep.i love it,i love all of your poems.your a very good writer.