by Hayley Marie Mar 1, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
His love is unbelievable |
by Lauren
Hey, don't listen to what that girl said ^^ |
It can be difficult sometimes to write, but you did a nice job. My only question is in regards to using the word "Over" at the start of the 3rd stanza. It just doesn't seem to go with the theme. Cheers! |