Hes The Only One (Acrostic)

by Hayley Marie   Mar 1, 2006


His love is unbelievable
Every touch is so gentle
Such sweet lips they drive me mental.

The times I feel I am up above
Heaven is where we are
Every time we make love.

Over is what I said to him,
Now my love for him is stronger,
Loving him is the main objective in my life,
Yeah I would love to be his wife.

Once we finish school,
No one can get in our way,
Ever together is where were going to stay.

*this is only my second of writing this style, and i love it. How am i doing?!*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    Hey, don't listen to what that girl said ^^
    your poem was good. that style of writing is cool.
    good poem
    -lauren

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    It can be difficult sometimes to write, but you did a nice job. My only question is in regards to using the word "Over" at the start of the 3rd stanza. It just doesn't seem to go with the theme. Cheers!