by Simon Hayes Mar 1, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Life's too short for arguments, |
by Melissa
Simon, "Vanilla Fragrance (Quatern)" so beautifully written.. I could actually smell the vanilla in the air. Awesome poem! ;o) |
by Sondos
The rhyme here is perfect without sounding forced. The message you are conveying is clear and well portrayed. Your choice of words really is great. Well Done. |
by The Wingless
This poem is very true. Life is too short for all that stuff. The flow in this was great, it didn't have a lot of imagery, but I don't think you were expecting it too? Anyways, I agree with you 100% life is too short for all those things. |
by Just Wishes
Agree wih ure theme 100%. we need such poems to revive our lives and i loved esp these lines : |
by Ûµ.Autumn.Ûµ
Thats really good. When i saw the title i thought it was going to be about dying but then i read the first line and ...i loved it :P keep it up! |