I love this, Simon! So powerful and you really rocked it out! Awesome message! ;o)

Nicely put my friend. Life is too short for games and bs. Too bad the world does not operate on this principle. Life would be so much better.

So truthfully put Simon .....
If if this poem could touch 10 people there will be 10 wiser people in the world tomorrow ....

I sincerely hope this one hits the top rated , so more will people will get a chance to understand that life really is to short .....

Wonderfully written from the heart of a wise man !!

My sentiments exactly, Simon. Life is way too short. I am both awed and inspired by your audacity to write a poem that some that do the things in the poem would consider insolence.
It amazes me how people twist things around. Anyway, brilliantly written!

hugs and smiles,
Mary

Simon,
Just thought I should let you know that I like this poem. It's just so true and the way you wrote it..... I like it, I even let my dad read it... and he agree:

*****GREAT, WONDERFUL POEM*****

Woah!
That's Really Good.. The Rhymes are Great And It Flows Really Really Well.. Well Done Keep It Up Mate!

Well said my friend I say we start a petition right now to end all games and bullshit all offenders shall be soundly thrashed with limp linguini until such a time as they are too busy laughing to indulge in any more games. Okay enough rambling loved the poem keep it up.
Tim

Nice write. Should be posted on all forums to get the message across ... but yet, that would just get some going again. Hopefully peace will reign. Cheers!

Hey well keep up the good worke hope to talk to you soon l8ters sarah

This poem is class ad so true luved it!!! take a look at mine thankz

Very cool! I like it! :) Keep up the good work! I hope you submit more!
(~~crroar)

Wow...i really like this poem .... u seeem like u feel strong about wat ur writing... keep it up...ooo n every1 shou;d read this poem its amazing!!! ~jennifer~

Ohhh I would have to agree with this poem. Very nice rhymes you have too.

Word Simon, word. 5/5

I love this poem

Thats really good. When i saw the title i thought it was going to be about dying but then i read the first line and ...i loved it :P keep it up!

Agree wih ure theme 100%. we need such poems to revive our lives and i loved esp these lines :
What goes around, comes around,
I'm sure that's how it goes

all the best,
just wishes

This poem is very true. Life is too short for all that stuff. The flow in this was great, it didn't have a lot of imagery, but I don't think you were expecting it too? Anyways, I agree with you 100% life is too short for all those things.

The rhyme here is perfect without sounding forced. The message you are conveying is clear and well portrayed. Your choice of words really is great. Well Done.

Sondos

Simon, "Vanilla Fragrance (Quatern)" so beautifully written.. I could actually smell the vanilla in the air. Awesome poem! ;o)