My internal grief...

by PURE HEART   Mar 1, 2006


In this dark whole world I find myself alone,
all have departed me and everyone is gone.

I wonder if one could wipe my tears,
and my silent scream anyone can hear.

Eyes have gone wet and lips have gone dried,
neither anyone understands me nor anyone tried.

I m crawling in the darkness looking for a beam of light,
but I realized my life has no day and it has become an endless night.

I am living the countable moments
just because god has granted those,
otherwise I have no urge to live
without someone loving and close.

Now a piece of hard heart resides in me full of grief and pain,
instead of blood, my tears are running through my vein.

I have end up my journey called life,
as I have no reason to live and no reason to smile.

I bid goodbye to all who are far from me as no one is near,
they don't love me now, so don't wish to be remembered when I am not here....

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  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Yet another great job take care hun sarah x

  • 18 years ago

    by Spike

    I.Love.It. Its so sad....its really good

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey, just hold on, these are just one of those days, thats it. Everything takes time so stay strong, trust me even i m coming out of those days and so will u soon.

    I liked the way u hv xpressed ur pain, no matter how happy i am, i still love reading such poems... :o))

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Very touching and heart breaking i must add. The fact that u believe that no one truly cares or loves u is absurd!!
    lol
    seriously though..i loved this poem. I think in the second and fourth line the arrangement of words seemed a little off but maybe it's just me,.
    i especially loved these lines:
    "I m crawling in the darkness looking for a beam of light,
    but I realized my life has no day and it has become an endless night"

    very visual..great work.
    I want to thank you for all ur comments..they really do mean a lot. im sorry i have not been able to return them!
    ill do my best:P
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Heart Touching poem....Nicely written...When tears go off your eyes and you feel there is no one to wipe away your tears...Just look around,may be someone is also crying along with you...Take care and keep smiling always...

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