Heart Touching poem....Nicely written...When tears go off your eyes and you feel there is no one to wipe away your tears...Just look around,may be someone is also crying along with you...Take care and keep smiling always...

Very touching and heart breaking i must add. The fact that u believe that no one truly cares or loves u is absurd!!
lol
seriously though..i loved this poem. I think in the second and fourth line the arrangement of words seemed a little off but maybe it's just me,.
i especially loved these lines:
"I m crawling in the darkness looking for a beam of light,
but I realized my life has no day and it has become an endless night"

very visual..great work.
I want to thank you for all ur comments..they really do mean a lot. im sorry i have not been able to return them!
ill do my best:P
xoxo

Hey, just hold on, these are just one of those days, thats it. Everything takes time so stay strong, trust me even i m coming out of those days and so will u soon.

I liked the way u hv xpressed ur pain, no matter how happy i am, i still love reading such poems... :o))

all the best and take care

I.Love.It. Its so sad....its really good

Yet another great job take care hun sarah x