Tell me

by Amanda   Mar 1, 2006


Tell me what's on your mind,
I really do want to know,
Because I really love you,
more than you'll ever know,

I may not be so perfect,
but you will always have me,
together we will make it,
take my hand and you will see,

I never want to lose you,
we have a special bond,
I'm sorry that I hurt you,
and I know that it was wrong,

I would even die for you,
I mean that from my heart,
it cuts me up to know I miss you,
and I hate myself for falling apart.

Copyright 2006 - Amanda Linzi

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  • 18 years ago

    by newlun

    This poem is awesome. keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Love how the rhymes in your poems don't seem forced and how it feels that you mean every word of this one. Other than that, wish I could tell you how to improve but I just don't know how it could be better!

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl an0ther g0od p0em g0od j0b

  • 18 years ago

    by Allisha Fox

    Its good. and i know how you feel i am going through that right now too.

  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    Nicely done. Keep up the good work and keep writing. 5/5

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