by J Lau
Nicely done. Keep up the good work and keep writing. 5/5 |
by Allisha Fox
Its good. and i know how you feel i am going through that right now too. |
by dora
Hey darl an0ther g0od p0em g0od j0b |
by Kaylee
Love how the rhymes in your poems don't seem forced and how it feels that you mean every word of this one. Other than that, wish I could tell you how to improve but I just don't know how it could be better! |
by newlun
This poem is awesome. keep it up |