by Once an Angel Mar 1, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Remember the sweet little girl in the sparkling pink dress? |
by Amberinaa
Wow, that so sad im sorry to hear about your friends. the poem was so good. the words and the rhymes. great! |
by Sarah Ann
Wow I thought this was absolutely amazing. You really have a great way with words, and a true unique talent. The poem touched me so much because sadly at one point in my life I could relate to the princess. It brought a tear to my eye, and got me thinking how thankful I am that I am no longer mixed up in that life. Keep up your wonderful work! 5/5 |
by PS
Hey i really like this. i really like the metaphor of the princess business. and i like the words you use. and this is a major compliment from me cuz i usually hate poems like this. awesome job! |
by chavii
Loved this poem , conveys such strong message for young lives trapped in drugs.The way u compare the innocence of childhood with present drug addiction is really praiseworthy. |
by Minkus
Nice poem, it's a good metaphor with the princess and stuff. Nice rhymes and a good message. 5/5. |