by Bella Mar 1, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Now I lay me down to die, |
by DevilWithin
Hey hun that was another great poem i love how you can write short poems and yet there so meaningful. xox Rach |
by Joe Holland
Written Fantastically. exept i think that the line: 'crimson flows from my skin' needs one more syllable perhaps 'flowing' instead of 'flows' overall brilliantly written |
by Joe Holland
Written Fantastically. exept i think that the line: 'crimson flows from my skin' needs one more syllable perhaps 'flowing' instead of 'flows' overall brilliantly written |
This poem is like totally depressing i was like what a downerbut i love it it is written very well |
This is FANTASTIC...im n love /w htis poem....its fantastic |