This is FANTASTIC...im n love /w htis poem....its fantastic

lol

i like it...

xoxo
elissa

This poem is like totally depressing i was like what a downerbut i love it it is written very well
trust_no_one

Written Fantastically. exept i think that the line: 'crimson flows from my skin' needs one more syllable perhaps 'flowing' instead of 'flows' overall brilliantly written

Written Fantastically. exept i think that the line: 'crimson flows from my skin' needs one more syllable perhaps 'flowing' instead of 'flows' overall brilliantly written

Hey hun that was another great poem i love how you can write short poems and yet there so meaningful. xox Rach