That was so cool, twisted in every sense of the word, wicked one!
Helen

Bill ,
I absolutely love this poem ....
So many twists and turns
Scary then passionate then deathly ..
Couldn't wait to get to the end to see what happened .

Hope I'm seeing it the right way ....

A master of twists and turns ... shocking ending! Great job :)

This was totally one of the best dark/suspence poem i have read!! your a master ;)

There's me thinking you were going with the love poems... However, this is one is just simply masterful!! You've created a superior dark poem... Those twists (As everyone has already pointed out)... Well lost for words... A magnificent write :)

The twists on this poem is amazing, one after another! Awesome stuff, I love the story, the flow, the rhyme scheme, well actually everything! Incredible poem!

Awesome, you are def. one of my new fav. poets on this site.. just amazing.. wish I could write half as well as you..leave me a comment sometime, take care, Sara

Thanks for the advice , ill def take it.. sincerely sara

Hey i think your poem is great. you are really good.

Man thats wicked messed up. You are quite the twisted mind.

Bill, "No Longer Alone" is so beautiful and heartfelt!

Fear raced through me, chasing me away
Forgetting to sway in life's little breeze
^^^ I love these lines! So sweetly written and what a proposal at the end. So much love in your words..

That was so good!
i loved it!
at the end my jaw dropped.
awesome ending, i never saw it coming!
well done!

My heart was reeally racing. That was exciting. Can't wait to read more of your poems.

Hey that was really good Bill. you write really good poems. excellent. please check out some of my poems.

lots of love
hayley

Bill,
"Two Hearts Become One" simply beautiful. So sweet and heartfelt and I LOVE the ending, just perfect! Great job and it's certainly nice to see you writing all these beautiful love poems lately! ;o)

WHOA~ amazing...i loved it..th words wnt togthr awesome...keep it up