Reflection

by Ashley   Mar 1, 2006


I heard the cries of
a young girls heart
when she learned they
had to part
the days had passed
the blood was shed
she looked so fragile,
almost dead
i watched her enter
and saw her eyes
filled with sadness
as she walked by
she knelt down slowly
and said her goodbyes
rose from the grave
looked into my eyes
and finally, i could see
the crying girl... was me

i left a lot of room for interpretation in this poem. but it means a lot to me. votes & comments would be appreciated

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  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Another beautiful poem. Very heartfelt. You're quiet talented, never stop writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    Hey hun I also love this poem how it is written really will. xox Rach

  • 18 years ago

    by Kat

    This was realy good and i liked it alot. it realy expresses how ur feeling and other ppl will be able to relate to it. very good indeed! keep writing =)

    kat xxx