The heart and dagger....a horrible combination to be on the recieving end of. Nicely done. Betrayal hurts to the bone.

Oh wow... very powerful poem. Loved it. Excellent!

Luv
Michelle

Deep and powerful... Very sombre, but excellent write!!

Wow, this is powerful and sad! Excellent writing, keep em' coming!

Very powerfully written with some strong and deep content within.

5/5

Nice work... keep it up I look forward to reading more.. 5 all the way, check mine out sometime..thanks, Sara

Thanks for the comment, keep in touch, sara

Why did she have to kil him i think it was uncalled for but i loved the rest of the poem

This poem was deep and awesome it means alot to ppl who have been burned very nice 5/5

So so so good and cleverly put together, i like the ending sooooooo much, its such a lovely poem!

well done
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I would have taken out a few words, just to make it flow a little better, but the overall idea of the poem is absolutely wonderful. you put into words something that needed to be said and you did it first, im inspired
well done

Ahh. Sorry was kinda shaken by the ending.. i dunno what i was expecting but it wasn't that. Very well written and loved it.

Well done Mary! this one is simply mind blowing.

thanks so much for your comments on my work.

love and luck
shobhana

The ending was wonderful!
Keep up the good work!

Deep really ,really deep excellent

Nicely done, a lot of the time the insanity is far too evident in poems like that, but that girl seems sane, if a bit of a fool for going out with a guy like that in the first place. 5/5
Helen

Wow that was great.

WOW that was great.