Sweet Dreams

by Ella   Mar 1, 2006


Sweet dreams little one
Its time for you to sleep
Forget the things you have done
As your sleep grows deep

Ignite the candle in your mind
And dream a mystery
Where you can find the kind
Of things that make you happy

Dream your dad was still alive
And your mom was here with you
Dream of good things in life
And they will all come true

Sweet dreams little one
And god will be with you
He don't care what you've done
Or anything you do

I wrote this off the top of my head its not good but plz comment

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  • 18 years ago

    by XxxXLoveless_WristsXxxX

    WOW this is awesome...it really moved me...x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenna Balkin

    Are you kidding, it's an awesome poem!! Your a good writer for having never use to write before ( I read ur profile )
    5/5
    Jen

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Although you haven't been writing for very long... because you really do write well. i cant even imagine your poetry in a few months... looking forward to reading more :D welcome to the club! hope you enjoy it!
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Well first of all that is a good poem! It saddens me:(..but good!

    Second..WELCOME to the bestest club...
    *drum roll*
    FISH BOWL
    If i can help in any way, feel free to contact the assistants (of which i am one) and our amazing leader Pure Silence.
    Make yourself at home.:P
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by sheena tuttle

    Hey this is really good and thanx for the comment.
    -sheena