Aww hun that was really good loved it. keep on writting. xox Rach

BRILLIANT!! i absolutely looove it! so original and creative.

"this just seemed to harsh a punishment
for god forbade their lust
condeming them both at once
him to the ocean her to her husband"

amazing! take care and stay strong.
-xXx-

Gd 1 babes, u're so brill,

This is really good, its very original and well written.

5/5

Its really good, I like your chosen words of vocab. anywho, thanx for commenting on my poems. 5/5