Wow, powerful poem! I love the honesty in your writing! The fact that you hold nothing back impresses the heck out of me, awesome job!

Tim, with the amount of poems you have, it's hard to keep up the reading. You are talented my friend, and you have very creative ideas. I have read who inspire you, and they are very good writers. This was a very good poem, you have a unique style.

I really enjoyed this one...I liked the raw emotion...you are very talented...keep it up.
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