Teenage Girls

Yo. That was the bomb. haha. i had to laugh a little bit. like i said read my poetry and tell me what u honestly think. Dont just say it was good, actually give me tips if u have some cuz i like ur style of write.
[theo]

You speak only the truth....I almost felt like I was at the beach....lol
Awesome once again!

At first I thought you might be kind of gross b/c I saw how old you were and the title of your poem. It made me to remember never judge a book by it's cover! :) that's happend to me so many times, b/c i'm a teenager and guys look at me like that. even when i'm in stores and stuff. it makes me feel bad some times b/c i know they have a wife. Sometimes, the wife's even right there and the STILL stare! i hope everyone knows that lust is a sin even if you're not married! ha. great poem tho. I could picture it so well.
~Monique
aka
Killa Kis$~

Um......interesting..

xoxo
elissa

This is just... LOL... Yep, you've nailed this one. The little details of the beach, mingled with the BIG teenage details... Superb!