Nice...perhaps if you extended it..it would be better...felt as if it only scraped the surface....wanted it to go a bit deeper....

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Oh, I loved it so much! The flow was just perfect!

Yep. This was good. You expressed your emotions really clearly in this one. Awesome job! Fav lines;
'I think i can hold it together but i always crack' I loved that part. Keep it up

`taleee xx