Loaded

by The Poetic Child   Mar 2, 2006


I'm tired of this hurt
Paint Go away
if you don't leave
Ill fine another way

And i have a perfect plan
The Blade is right here
I want everyone to see
and to see it very clear

Pain is eating me up
Its Taking my Every Breathe
It's going to keep going
Until theres nothing even left

Seconds just fly way by
But ever second adds more
Adds more to my Pain
And Closes my future Door

I have to be reminded everyday
On how i feel like I'm played
Looking at a mirror and it shatters,
Because I've just been betrayed

My Breathe is really running short,
I cant even type this Rhyme
I'm bout to do something I'd never do,
I'm bout to permit a crime

My own crime of suicidal
But really could it be
I can see I'm not loved
So I'd be making everyone happy

"He asked me out this morning,
I couldn't turn him down he was so sincere",
Well Good thats Wonderful
Another Excuse not to be here...

Yeah i have no use
These words i write here are pathetic,
Soon i wont be here
Just maybe in the medic

Take me away now
My heart just exploded
if this knife wont work i got a gun
and this gun is Loaded...

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  • 18 years ago

    by JV

    Wow... thats really good and sad... yea but its really good!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Taja

    Hey wats up? i know exactly how your feeling my first true love broke up with me yesterday....and he already moved on but what really hurts is the fact that he sed he loved me...OUCH!!! i love him so much so i know exactly where your coming from but sucided is not the answere if you need someone to talk to you can talk to me...im here for you i know you dont know me but im still here for you you can e-mail me at cute_desirable_adorable@yahoo.com...iight get at me!~

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Man you're such a good writer..you can write any style. Your're gonan find another gurl adn better..not that you want any gurl but here..but unfortunatly what choice have you got, but to. LYLAB.

    Lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by Spanish Star

    Wow..this is very sad, but a great poem. I loved it. You are truly talented. Sorry for the hurt your obviously going threw right now, but keep writing and in time the pain will heel. I know.. Great poem ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by **Stacy**

    Wow!!! this is really good, i love this completely 5/5. i kno exactly how u feel but dont think tha death is ur only way out. i always here if u need 2 talk, take care hun, bye.

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