Wow!!! this is really good, i love this completely 5/5. i kno exactly how u feel but dont think tha death is ur only way out. i always here if u need 2 talk, take care hun, bye.

Wow..this is very sad, but a great poem. I loved it. You are truly talented. Sorry for the hurt your obviously going threw right now, but keep writing and in time the pain will heel. I know.. Great poem ;)

Man you're such a good writer..you can write any style. Your're gonan find another gurl adn better..not that you want any gurl but here..but unfortunatly what choice have you got, but to. LYLAB.

Lissa

Hey wats up? i know exactly how your feeling my first true love broke up with me yesterday....and he already moved on but what really hurts is the fact that he sed he loved me...OUCH!!! i love him so much so i know exactly where your coming from but sucided is not the answere if you need someone to talk to you can talk to me...im here for you i know you dont know me but im still here for you you can e-mail me at cute_desirable_adorable@yahoo.com...iight get at me!~

Wow... thats really good and sad... yea but its really good!!!