The knife

by HEARTBROKEN   Mar 2, 2006


The knife is calling to me,
Calling my name over and over again.
It is staring at me
Wanting me to end my life.
I have to fight it
For you the love of my life.
This knife can not win,
Nor can the others.
I am fighting but I am losing.
Cutting me up .
I have to fight for my life.
This knife has cut me bad just like the others.
Now it is leaving me to die.
You walk in just in time
To save my life.
The knife has lost this time!

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  • 18 years ago

    by ღMőŁŀŷ Ĺůvš Ũღ

    Oo i loved this poem!! i really did! it was great and i loved the ending! theres not much poems out there like this and thats why i like it! im sorry about you confusions with your boyfriend and your ex. Sometiems other people dont relize how hard it is to get over someone....trust me...i know!
    but you did a great job and thanks for the comment!

  • 18 years ago

    by Carrie

    Great write.. I liked the ending... with the "the knife has lost this time"... i wasn't expecting anything like that... but anywayz I hope things get better for you... 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by I am begining to think it is not worth loving you

    Sorry... but razor blades r btr 5/5

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