Comments : The knife

  • Sorry... but razor blades r btr 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Carrie

    Great write.. I liked the ending... with the "the knife has lost this time"... i wasn't expecting anything like that... but anywayz I hope things get better for you... 5/5

  • Oo i loved this poem!! i really did! it was great and i loved the ending! theres not much poems out there like this and thats why i like it! im sorry about you confusions with your boyfriend and your ex. Sometiems other people dont relize how hard it is to get over someone....trust me...i know!
    but you did a great job and thanks for the comment!