Remarkable write Kaitlin, I can't even find words to describe it!!! |
by LadyPearl
Very touching and clear-written poem. The flow seems a bit awkward, you could separate one line into two lines |
by Gracie Jo
Great poem, Kaitlin. 5/5 |
by Sean Allen
"That look upon her face was unmistakeable." mistakable is a difficult word to spell, I had to go look it up. There is no 'e' in the middle. |
Wow |