This is the most amazing poem I have read in over eight years. I SWEAR. It's frickin' amazing. It flowed perfectly, it touched me, it made me want to cry, yet smile at the same time. I can't explain how well done this was, except that it was great. I'm sorry to hear about your mother, I hope she doesn't have cancer. Best wishes, doll. Take care. |
by Simon Hayes
Sad and heart breaking write! Wonderfully written, clearly written from the heart. I hope the best for you. |
by Natalie84
I read what you wrote in the Cooids thread. I know how you feel...the waiting is what kills you. When I was 14 doc found pre cancerous cells in my mom's uterus. She had to go through surgery and I was away from her for some time. I went crazy -- I had counselors and teachers at school hounding me...it was obvious that I was going through hell as my smile was gone. Seven years later and she's well...my grandmother was diagnosed with breast cancer and she pulled through as well...I hope your mother makes it through this ordeal and I pray to God that you're alright. I know my words of encourangement mean very little when in this type of situation but know that I'm here...You know my email - if you need to chit chat! Keep your spirits up little lady!! |
by Bill Turner
What a beautifully written poem. Well done! |
by Cuddles
Beautiful and heartbreaking! I hope everything goes well for your mom. I'll be praying it does. |
by VJstorm
Wow...the heart-felt sadness and the grimness of the situation in the poem brought a tear to my eye. |
by Taylor♥
Good luck! with ur mom! keep up hope! love **~**Taylor**~** |
Hope ya mum is all good hun..mad poem tho... |
Extream. Very good. I enjoyed this one. |
by ashley
Hey im so sorry to hear about your mom. i really loved the poem it meant a lot to me...i once had an aunt who died of breast cancer. this poem...well lets just say that i feel like crying right now but i guess it doesnt help that i have a sad song playing in the back round lol well i hope you mom does well. much love ashley |