Below the rain

by Black Rose   Mar 2, 2006


Have you seen below the rain past the gates of all hope and faith.
Were only broken hearts and souls do lie with out a body or the ability to cry

With each time the big gates open a little ray of light does shine giving just a glimmer of hopeâ?¦. but the rain soon follows drowning thous who reach for the light

Soon they learn that there is no escape nor reason for prayer
Once you have fallen below the rain from then on you can only live in complete and utter pain.

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Well written, though in ways it seems unfinished it is in general a well written piece with some good content

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Wonderful job. Try seperating into more lines and adding more on.

  • 18 years ago

    by David

    I like it but isnt it sposed to b is not if?