"Although I feel so fake in a mechanical world."
"When you cry you rust,
Fitting into the mold just like everyone else."
two of the greatest lines from your poetry.... i love how you created the similarity to man made mechanics and the fake man made world that surrounds us..... thats an awesome poem.... i think im going to put "when you cry you rust" and " i feel so fake in this mechanical world" on my myspace if you dont mind..... i really liked this poem i think i reda it like 7 times.... excellent job 5/5