In My Head

by lonelynow   Mar 2, 2006


I didn't have a name for this, and the one i came up with is really bad...if anyone has any good suggestions..they would be helpful. Thanks.

In a corner
Staring at the wall
At the top of the stairs
As I start to fall

By myself
Out of the crowd
Falling now
Shout out loud

Eyes widen
Tears threaten to fall
I'm peaceful falling
Getting away from it all

Why can't people forgive
My fat past?
Nearing the bottom
Ending it at last

Those hateful stares
Are they just in my head?
I've fallen now
I'm finally dead

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  • 18 years ago

    by Infected with His Deadly Love

    Hey great poem, I love ur poems!! Ur deffenitly( I no I cant spell) going on my fav list!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Hmm nice poem. Loved every part of it. Very well done! I'm impressed.

    Lotsaaa love
    -xxx-

    Oh and by the way, I think this title is pretty good actually. Personally I would have picked a title with "falling" in it. Cause that's what the poem is basically about.

  • 18 years ago

    by laura

    I really like it! really touching. how about peacefull fall! x x x x x x x

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