by J Lau Mar 2, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Misty air fills the icy cold sky, |
by Debbie
This was a stunning, poetic success. How you've weaved your words to paint a beautiful scenery with Nature's delicacies is too tantalizing for words. Though I've come across such metaphorical themes, wherein the portrayal of the Divinity into a "painter" was not uncommon, I was utterly enchanted, yet again, by the moral lesson this endearing work had brought into play. Indeed, there is more than meets the eye. =] |
Wow.. so deep and yet soo powerful.. I really love the good choices of word.. it shows how much work you put nito this.. about nature.. I cannot even do that.. you have talent and I hope you never stop using them.. good job and keep up with your amzing work .. Once again.. good job 5/5 |
Wow I love this one.. the imagery was fantastic.. and I loved how you described each event like the sunset, it was breathtaking and reminded me of just how beautiful nature can be when you look at it from a different point of view. AMAZING write thanx you for sharing that with me. |
You painted an amazing picture, it was beautiful, one of your best. well done huni |
by Jenni
This is definately my favorite of yours! The images you conjured in my mind were superb! There is nothing about this poem that I could change, nothing! Wonderful job! 5/5 |