That was a very well planed and executed poem. full of imagery. personally i'm not religous in any normal sense of the word. i believe in god but not how most people do. but never-the-less i like how you subtly brought god into it. a nice long poem.
good work
Rocky

This is definately my favorite of yours! The images you conjured in my mind were superb! There is nothing about this poem that I could change, nothing! Wonderful job! 5/5

You painted an amazing picture, it was beautiful, one of your best. well done huni

much love and many kisses,
bex

Wow I love this one.. the imagery was fantastic.. and I loved how you described each event like the sunset, it was breathtaking and reminded me of just how beautiful nature can be when you look at it from a different point of view. AMAZING write thanx you for sharing that with me.

Wow.. so deep and yet soo powerful.. I really love the good choices of word.. it shows how much work you put nito this.. about nature.. I cannot even do that.. you have talent and I hope you never stop using them.. good job and keep up with your amzing work .. Once again.. good job 5/5

This was a stunning, poetic success. How you've weaved your words to paint a beautiful scenery with Nature's delicacies is too tantalizing for words. Though I've come across such metaphorical themes, wherein the portrayal of the Divinity into a "painter" was not uncommon, I was utterly enchanted, yet again, by the moral lesson this endearing work had brought into play. Indeed, there is more than meets the eye. =]

I gave you a 5 for this fantastic piece of work. Thanks for sharing. I hope you all the best and take care!

`Marian