Crumble

by Holly   Mar 2, 2006


My world is beginning to crumble all around me and I have no where to go

My heart has shattered and I have no one to turn to. My mind is in a haze, what am I going to do

I'm ready to give in, I have no life, I give up take me away theres nothing left here for me

As I crumble, I take one last look in hopes my hero will show Someone appears as I begin to fade, but all they do is laugh at me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lexi

    This poems really good. 5/5 Love it!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Stazifer Stazington

    Love it! im kinda speechless, its great!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kallie

    I can really relate to your poems, there amazing!

  • 18 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    I wish it was that easy....i live on the other side of the country......i cant just go up to him and say oh hey yeah i love you....i dont see him.....and it doesnt mean a lot when all u really do is talk to him online.....thanks anyways for ur comment!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    I like this poem b/c it dosen't actually straight out say the pain and it has a really deep meaning to it which I like! Keep up the really good work! 5/5! Thx for commenting on my poem too! :)

    -Stephanie-

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