Aww.. thats so sad, its almost bringing tears to my eyes, beutifully written, keep it up

Where u beeeen you need to call me leave me msg..u hear me lol

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jk

i saw ur myspace
did you add me??

Hello where have you been?? I miss you

Hey you what is up..I havnt see you or talked you and i am kind of worrried..wel yeha later nick.?

Hey its me nick I changed my name again, You never talk to me any more.. ;-( well ttyl please takl to me..i miss talking to you later nick

This is really nice. Theres some rough patches, but I really like the theme. Not to be mean but I think that you tried to write "break" not "brake" in the first stanza

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OMG becky i love this one... it kinda made me wanna cry tho

LOVE YOU

Another great poem 5/5