For now

by livingwith   Mar 3, 2006


Fall I may fall I might
As I scream but never heard
As I cry these tears of gold
Please take them in your greed
Maybe you'll hold me
For what ever your reason I just need someone you
Please I beg... Please I scream... Please I cry... when my voice goes silent and I get use to the darkness... I always cry then to forget why...

If you could be that one I cry on, listen to my voice the words don't mater, be the one to hold me up, let me fall later now is all that matters

Save me tonight save me this morning save me today
I just don't want to hurt now

I hope I'm not asking to much...

( please vote and comment, it was a night when i needed someone and i was falling apart no one noticed)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hold Me

    Ya a realy good writer keep it up, i love all your poems
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by PoeticJustice

    I really like it, i like the emotion in it the most, very heart-felt

  • 18 years ago

    by sibyllene

    I agree with one of the comments here - there's something interesting about the way that the lines are cut off and run together. it makes the whole poem have a sort of churning, chaotic tone. which seems to be what you were going for. ; ) A couple spelling things, but i'm sure you could catch those when you edit. good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Some random lines strung together in a nice way that didn't totally mess with the rest of it. Not awesome but powerful nevertheless. It wasn't really something that I personally like but still it had a quality to it on the emotional level that was good.
    ~Faith

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    5/5 poem, great job done.

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