It's very 'pretty' and I use that term loosely because 'pretty' suggests soul-less and it's not. It's very emotionally-charged, but I couldn't help but laugh at..
'you should hold my hand, you stole it from the start'
For some reason, I had a vision of you handless :]
[Yes, I'm partly made of retard so excuse that.]
Anyway, it's very nice, not my cup of tea, but I can tell your angle.x

Umm. That was good. The emotion, was very well written......humm. Nice work.

-Jennifer.

Overall Rating: 4.1/5