by Bill Turner Mar 3, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
rekindled love
Standing all my life, leaning into the wind |
I really liked it, good job |
by Kelly
Wow, it sounds like you have come along ways in your lifetime...many hardships and now a light at the end of the tunnel! I am sooo happy for you and enjoy reading your poems! |
by hm
Hey really cool poem,i think it was sooo cute... |
by NannO
Wow.. a beautiful piece of work.. i enjoyed ur rhyme scheme.. a little different than those ive read before.. deep words that go straight thru the heart.. keep up the gr8 work |
by shobhana kumar
So beautiful. i like the way you start out your love poems on a deep, sad note and end it so beautifully - it seems such a befitting end to the agony portrayed at the start. |